Due to being unable to access tripod, I was never able to post the current story location. I haven't worked on it in a long time....

For those who have NOT read it, the story was written back during a patch up to 3.0 I believe... I might be wrong. Point is, the Kharaa tec tree made a huge turn and the story was sort of meant as an expo for it.

anyhow, the link:

http://www.monkeysociety.com/Monster/Index.htm

I miss having feedback.

I remember monster! It was amongst the best fan-fics around and one of my favourites. deepshadows, u r a terrific reader. im going to read it all over again now.

Thank you DeepShadows..

I have reformatted and lost all my links..

I know what i shall be reading all afternoon at work...

Have you written any new chapters?

I've half of one I haven't seen about finishing. The updates have been half years to years, so there you go I was considering revamping the whole thing though... rereading it I found a lot of errors/immaturities in the writing. Mostly when it comes to the dialogue....

Anyhow I'll gander through it again and see if I can't finish the thing.

I'm planning on re-working my own Brobdanagian story, although i lost the entire file, including all the future chapters i had written, and all my re-written earlier chapters, so all i have left is what i managed to slavage from my forum posts here.

It was a great idea, but i think may have bene a bit too ambitious for a first time story!!

A truly fantastic read. It so deftly recreates the feel of Natural Selection that I cannot help but be reminded of my own panic-stricken first experiences as a marine within the game.

Please continue.