Well, I actually drew this quite some time ago. I've been away from the concept scene from quite some time. As usual, edit at will and leave me some suggestions, or tell me what you think.

Feedback is appreciated and welcomed!

-Sid

receiver is too short - the shell wouldn't even fit in there xD the exposed heatshield looks pretty weird too imo.

You could always put the shell in at an angle...

Lawl. Alright.

Give me a bit, I'll see what I can do.

Alright, here we go.

Larger reciever:



And one without a heatshield.

Much better - version without heatshield looks hawt.

Wewt! I Love hearing that!

i like the headshield would be great if it was chunkier, maybe different shaped holes and extend it back to the receiver.

I just had a hectic day trying to get a torjan off of my machine, but I'll be sure to get on it. Good idea Kaine, thanks!

Alright. How is this? A bit better maybe? I tried to bulk it up a bit.

That does look a little better, would you care to include back and front illustrations?
It could help modeling it alot, in the sense of keeping the shape the artist thought of while drawing this.

Heh, I absolutely suck at front/back illustrations.

I like to use the lame excuse that I'm giving the modeler artistic freedom.

A little better, yes... but something still seems amiss. I'll tinker around with the drawing a bit.

I got rid of that silly venting near the front.

i liked the vents... it seems to me shotguns always lack detail... adding more random lines and gadgets make shotties look a whole lot nicer imo... otherwise the view model just turns into some fugly pole with one or two colors...

default ns shotty is nice... and perhaps an example of what i mean by random details...

Yeah, I'm not very good when it comes to Shotguns, not very good at all.

My shotguns look too modern and lack any kind of detail - I'm really not happy with the final product right now, but don't really know where to go with it... It seems too busy or something, yet at the same time it's lacking... and I can't add or fix it with suggestions because I'll just make it more busy.

But if you have a good idea, by all means - *please* edit the picture if you want - I really don't mind people editing my drawings at all.

So go for it - fire up photoshop.. PSP.. gimp.. even MS Paint! It's been done before. - Even if you're just trying to get a general idea across.

a shell coutner peep slight to tell if theres at least one on more shells left in the sprin loaded shaft also yo ucouldgo as far as to add the slide arm to the pump exsternaly

Ammo counter... awesome idea. *Puts on to-draw list*

'Nuff said.

Well i just felt like modeling this 2day. Wont be done for a while as i have many other things im doing... and i should post some pictures soon. If i don't, then i gave up.

Bottom cylinder must be larger than the shell that fits in it.

-Expanded the bottom cylinder
-Added a [crappy] Ammo counter. (I haven't played NS in ages... I even forget how much the shirtgun holds!)

What an ergonomic shotgun! You could camp a Hive all day and not feel a thing!

Awesome, thanks! That's what I try to go for.

Did...did no one...notice...my colors?...*cries*

D'aww, I thought they were good. You stick to the TSA scheme pretty well!

Handle section looks a bit anemic and the angle of the setup there doesn't look comfy at all!

Maybe expand the size of the heat-shield so the entire top 'tube' is uniform in width? what about hexagonal holes instead of the rectangular ones?

http://world.guns.ru/shotgun/sh19-e.htm

That link is to a Benelli M4 Super 90, check out the pistol grip on that.

Ohhh, I missed your post. :3 Awesome, I'll see what I can do.

I had to really fight with that handle. :x

it looks to me like it would be more like one of those terminator shotties... with the flippy handle bit that ###### the gun.. would be fun to try to make animations...

Lever action shottie?! That's a good idea, Ratteh!

Lol. XD

i like! but i dont think it's supposed to lock your index finger in? im not sure though

I knew I was forgetting something!

OMG sexey!

I was going to comment that it looked exactly like the AVP2 shottie in the start, now however... mmmh

EDIT: is it automated since i cannot find any way to pump it..

Good call, man.

No pumping is required - it's lever-action.

ooh... western. Get of my property skulk! Johnny get Sids super sexy shotgun

lol Bloo. XD

Btw, the forehandle is just temporary, but it'll do for now, I guess.

orly? because i've started working on this.. dont let that stop you from making adjustments though as you see fit

Did I say temporary?

You *do* know that that's spanish for "permanent", right?

so that means it's only permanent for now? you guess?

What I'm saying is that it's good, I won't change it if you're working on it.

What app are you using to draw these sid?

Paint Shop Pro 10, I believe.

Ok, colors of the final version:

TSA:



Other:

I took the liberty of coloring the scheme, However, i suddenly found out that i was coloring the wrong scheme.

This made me really, really really sad...

Anyways this should give you a idea about how im thinking about the color



I can transfer the colors to the latest if you want

F***

hmmm yeah i like bloo's colors... too bad i wont be able to skin it anyway... but who knows maybe ill give it a go... i am working on the model on and off... whenever i take pictures of it theyre not very flattering so im not even going to try... just proof that it's a wip...:



edit: i noticed the error near the trigger.. fixed it... too lazy to put in a different picture... tri count is 1221 so far

Wow, Rat - that looks excellent! Awesome, awesome job man! At first I thought it was a recolour - you matched the concept sooo well!

Once again, thanks man.

Here you go... (Did some minor adjustments)

And here's my version, done last night but couldn't post because I think the forums died or something...



lol. I personally like my ammo counter better, but eh.