That's a very cool concept, and personally I think 3 and 4 are really good.

There are two things I want to point out about the designs.

With the fourth design, the left hand fingers would be extending over the grip and near the body of the gun, which would be uncomfortable. Maybe change the front grip a bit to give more room for the hand so the player wouldn't have to grip the body? Additionally the player hand would be right near the barrel, which obviously would be hot and having a muzzle flash shooting out a few inches from the hand. Maybe you could elongate the barrel a little?

Other then that 4 is very nice.

The only other thing that bugs me is that all the designs (except maybe 3) seem to be rather back heavy. When you start shooting, that gun barrel will go skyward in no time. Maybe you could make the barrel/front of the gun longer, and shrink the backend?

Those are just some quick observations, it's a cool concept.

so i got bored and decided to do some paintshop hax :D

my attempt at making it kinda more of a carbine with some hi tech photon grenade launcher :o
the scope is crappy, i kinda rushed it D:

go ahead and play around with it if you want :D

olo btw where does the magazine go?

awesome. now the diners club shock troops finally have a gun to call their own.

its a bullpup rabbity...so at the back

Nice concept rabbity + sid....i might have a go at a couple of them at some point. Finally have a break from Uni in 2 weeks for a few months...so gunna knock out some models.

Sid, start doing some mines, a welder, a marine, and a heavy, and you will have one absolutely SICK NS pack. I'm not joking man, I'm dead serious, these models designs are wicked and you should probably talk to Chrono about it.

Yeah sid, get a full pack of your stuff together. I've got the summer to model and map if u dont mind me having a bash. Not seen chrono round here for a while

Woah! I didn't see those few posts.

Rabbity - that is so cool!

Hey guys - if you want a 'pack' of my stuff - check out my website full of concepts - it updates now and then.

Hey Sid, I lost track of who done what where and when, plus I know this is an ancient thread, but I saw this concept and just couldn't resist!



And in case this isn't actually Sid's drawing: Kudos to whoever DID make it; it's AMAZING.

Anyone with color crits?

Ok, everyone vanished.

new mag position is good, the stock needs to be adjusted to accomodate this - the bolt is pointless and needs to go, the second trigger for the grenade launcher needs to go, then i might take a crack at it

heh. I added the trigger cause I couldn't think of any other way for it to be launched; I wasn't really trying to make a nice one. Sid could probably make a better shape for it, and I'll add the colors.

Stock is fine as is, really.

Can i get the first post updated with links to the original concept and its lastest evolution. Sid we go a ways back and I just thought you might want to sit down one weekend and do this clean up ya post concepts, your writen content is fine. just haveing to search a few pages to find the last mod of it the one to be finaly produced is a bit random. Also including a bullet link to a diff page as well as a image to anyone else work they have added or modded from your original concept would help, just in case some ones looking to model a gun.

If your going to put a bolt in, put it right in front of the magazene. Whole purpose of the bolt is to load, fire, and eject the round.

HELLO EVERYONE, I'm finally back, and, to "celebrate," I went back a few pages and grabbed one of the older concepts of the Periah back when it was actually still an SMG/Pistol. I'm currently coloring it in my style, and will post it up when I'm done.

Man, Sid, you really need to tell your image program not to put so many random shades of gray around its lines. lol

And here it is, done:



I suppose it's not quite 100% done, but you get the idea...I'll post up the "done" version when I've edited out all the little bits of white and such.

Oh, and I have NO CLUE why I made the trigger blue...

(Yes, it's me.)

i got an idea just make the "nade luncher trigger" on the left site from the TOP

so if you hold it you pull that with the left hand while holding with the right :>



but i like the idea of the 2nd trigger