co_hearne
Constructive critisism is always appreciated
rhu
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Rather than clutter up the forum with my pics heres a link to some,
co_hearne
Constructive critisism is always appreciated
rhu
co_hearne
Constructive critisism is always appreciated
rhu
From the screenshots this looks like a really nice map.
The only thing I spotted was in picture #13, there was some slightly dodgy texture work.
The only thing I spotted was in picture #13, there was some slightly dodgy texture work.
From the screens that I waited to load, Looks a bit open imo, good, but open.
Edit: also, try to use less "square" rooms.
Edit: also, try to use less "square" rooms.
| QUOTE (Toothy @ Oct 6 2004, 03:30 AM) |
| From the screenshots this looks like a really nice map. The only thing I spotted was in picture #13, there was some slightly dodgy texture work. |
oops, do you mean the roof texture on the floor? didnt notice that myself
or do you mean where the walls meet in the far corner or have i missed something else?rhu
The walls slant upwards towards the ceiling. You have a different texture on the slanted bits, which doesn't align properly where it meets.
I realise that doesn't explain much better, I can always post a picture if you're still not sure what I mean.
I realise that doesn't explain much better, I can always post a picture if you're still not sure what I mean.
yep. looks pretty good. the website there is a little troublesome though. I had to reload every time i opened a picture because it would show the HTML instead of the page.
My only comment:
Change the Hive, you don't want it to be a one-sided event like that map that somehow went official (can't remember its name so I'll just call it co_shootHiveFrom50m4TehWin). By that I mean give it some sort of shield so that Marines have to be a bit closer before they start spawn-camping.
P.S. Yes I know the aforementioned map has been changed, I just can't understand how it passed initial playtesting with such a blatant team bias and furthermore how it got into the official mapcycle in its previous state.
Change the Hive, you don't want it to be a one-sided event like that map that somehow went official (can't remember its name so I'll just call it co_shootHiveFrom50m4TehWin). By that I mean give it some sort of shield so that Marines have to be a bit closer before they start spawn-camping.
P.S. Yes I know the aforementioned map has been changed, I just can't understand how it passed initial playtesting with such a blatant team bias and furthermore how it got into the official mapcycle in its previous state.
| QUOTE (Toothy @ Oct 6 2004, 05:26 AM) |
| The walls slant upwards towards the ceiling. You have a different texture on the slanted bits, which doesn't align properly where it meets. I realise that doesn't explain much better, I can always post a picture if you're still not sure what I mean. |
Id appreciate that Toothy, TBH I'm not sure I'm even looking at the same pic as you are
rhu
too open. the hive is... nah. thats not a alien-friendly hive. and try to add some more details, overall architecture is ok but the lack of details makes it look empty.
*Off topic*
Lt.Gravity, I just clicked on the link in your sig thinking "OMG! NS SOURCE! On 98% and I didn't even know it was being made!!"
*On topic*
Nice, if open, as mentioned several times.
Lt.Gravity, I just clicked on the link in your sig thinking "OMG! NS SOURCE! On 98% and I didn't even know it was being made!!"
*On topic*
Nice, if open, as mentioned several times.
There.
To solve the problem toothy has pointed out use something called a "texture shimmy" by some of us Valve-ERC guys.
(crown molding or other transition brush)
(crown molding or other transition brush)
| QUOTE (x5 @ Oct 6 2004, 08:55 PM) |
| To solve the problem toothy has pointed out use something called a "texture shimmy" by some of us Valve-ERC guys. (crown molding or other transition brush) |
OK, thanks Toothy for pointing that one out.
x5, you mean like a little trim brush type of thing right?
rhu
I could have sworn that bit in brackets wasnt there when I replied
I guess you do mean that though..later on that evening.........
I updated that area (and some others), does this look OK now?
co_hearne
rhu
You can still shoot it, but I suppose now at least aliens can fling themselves in front of the fire if the hive's on 4%. Shove in a ramp (bump) that goes up then down so that marines can't hit the bottom of the Hive.
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