I would always start something. take a look at it and immediatly stratch it, but this looks promising. So i wanted to get other peoples opinoins. please go easy first seriouse map and its just the rr.





Theres an satellite thingy outside but its now glowing red at the top... yet
and if your a skulk you can run up the window and look down I got some funky base thing goin on.

First ever? Nice. Keep working. I'd like to see what you did outside the window.

Yellgrey... *shiver* the new Wall_Lab...

~ DarkATi

I quite like the new wall lab, it has a quite unique feature.

Crazy - Slightly off topic and a little stupid - but "first readyroom ever" ? I've seen lots of readyrooms

shoulda seen that one coming

i think u need to put alot of work into ur texturing alignment and choice

ATI, yellgrey > you.

to be honest after looking at it properly, i think u shud delete it all

you need to work on ur texturing alot, your alignment is off on almost everything.
your brush work is at best average, use trims on the edges of floors where it suddenly drops, or use a texture that ends with the brushwork (last pic by pit)
the pipe in the first shot shud either be a func_wall or u shud put a flange (making this a func wall) at wither end where it touches the wall (this will stop the brush cutting into the wall and giving the weird light effect u have where the top pipe touches the wall

ur lighting seems weird
u have spots (in the last pic) emanating from either nothing or just a basic light, not one that wud cause the spot u have, also in the same pic, the tex lights need to be done better on the back wall, use an overlay

I really can't stress it enough that u need to work on ur texturing, each time i look at the pics something else stands out as being done badly

hmm wasnt quite what i expected, but if people say that its not up to snuff, am with that. Thx for the tips

Hello my friend, whom I do not know...

Pretty much you need to work on your texture alignment in a lot of places and use some overlay textures. I'll show you how to do that next time I'm over. Don't delete it, this is by far the best thing I've seen from you.

clownfayce.

its a good start but you still have work to do.

architecture looks promising, though i cant really judge it from these screenshots. textures: like darkati, im no fan of the yellgrey series. try to experiment with different textures. also that striped grey floor texture is... interesting. i suggest you look at that as well.

lighting is just too bland and white, from these shots id say that red lights could (and would) go well, but it would feel too ns_metallish. i dunno.