oi

why the blinding pink?

is that the topic?

btw, CUZ I FELT LIKE MAKING IT that...

Couldn't you at least try to cut the lower pink, it not like it needed or anything.
As for the concept, eh.. detail? Are you even trying or are you just wanting to finish concept after concept. If you put more than 10 minutes into something, changes are that you'll end up with something nicer.

imo the clip looks like burnt bacon, try using a straight long clip on the gun

tbh that thing looks extreamly uncomfortable lol, and a wee bit too bulky, even for a hmg

now that you have updated the pic, try making the front grip come out a bit, rather than go along with the flow of the edges of the gun

a short tip for future concepts:

Save it as GIF or PNG! JPG is very bad for graphics because of the evil compression

looking good BUT you need more details and not so bulky but keep on concepting y?u?l get better trust me

ya can clashen

its jpg to save space and not all day loading for 52kb ppl....

52kb is nothing...

you makin fun of pink? lol

yeh its very bulky, needs to be more streamlined

First some advice for all the critiques out there, stop being so wasted?
Mainly you tell the person whats bad and whats good about the model, perhaps in a nice way too?
And ask him to make a new concept instead of modifying this one into something YOU guys want...
And stop the god damn "why the blinding pink?".
Thats just being an idiot, you ask polite, "May i give you an advice about the background, you might want to change it into a less brighter colour, that would be easier to look at."

is that so hard?


Alright, advice for the concept artist.

Try and make the body a bit less high the next time, because a weapon is alot better when its long and slinky instead of high and bulky.

The warhammer 40k weaponry are stupid!

And try to include those simple details (any other detail can be added to make the weapon look a bit more advanced, but IMO, all those "cool details" can be hid behind metal plates, like on ur concept.

Details:
Safety thingy
Magazine release of some kind
Shell Ejection port (Ususally on the right side of the weapon.)

Then there is about 100 other details that could be added, IE: slide release, slide-lock, barrelvents, heatshield, etc.


And probably one of the most important rules, try imagine holding the weapon, would it be comfortable? Is it ergonomic enough? Would it be easy to wield? Not to heavy in the front? or the back, or too heavy at all, or too long, or too breakable?

(That last one is easily fixed with titanium weaponry )


Edit: Take a look at this simple weapon, and you see some basic detailing.
And some advanced, but the magazine release and the safety thingy is the two probably most important things

Edit: Added a smaller image

the bullets being in the open like that is a bad idea....
*remembers ww2 disaster*

You mean WW1 disaster...

Reason for that is that dust and other things can get between the rounds, increasing the possibility of jams and stuff.

meh. just use a transperent clip. Who said it was out in the open?