This is my first map, and i know, it isnt perfect, but i think, its playable.
You can download it from http://www.umszki.hu/~demien/co_aurora.rar

Its only a beta

could you posts some pics? It takes me about 10 mins to load up an NS map cause Steam hates me.

pics are bigger, than 120k, and i dont know, how to make them lower

Open them with paint and save the .bmp files as .jpeg - that will often shrink the file to less than 120K.

they are at .jpg, and still bigger

First pic

second one

and the third one, is less than 120k

It's blue. It's red. It's green. You really need to tone down the lighting as it's washing out everything, from the atmosphere to the architecture itself.

Also, use a more neutral colour shuch as white or light yellow as your main light source, with reds, blues and greens etc being the supporting lighting.

Since i havent downloaded the actual map yet i cant comment on the layout instead ill just comment on the pics.

First off try an add a little diversity to yurr lighting instead of just one intense light

an secondly add detail to the level, there are alot of flat walls and ceilings in there.

Throw in a few pipes now an again or a cpu console to add a lil spice to the level

Apart from the obvious 'Travolta' Lighting system, try adding rims etc, this helps create boldness and emphasis to the architecture that its framing.

e.g. the glass roof on the third pic. Its a good idea, encorporating natural light..but
add some nice rims..or pipes like previously stated.

It will improve it ahell of alot.

Keep it up.

Holy color contrast, Batman!

OMG no! this is too much like an disco-raveroom. RED, GREEN AND HEAVY MARINE BLUE COLORS DONT FIT IN ONE PLACE ON THE MAP. NO!

srry but no it's ugly

its kinda boxxy if ya ask me, try and add some kool architcture in it...... like lamps, stairs, steam, particle systems, etc..