Hey, i made this map and im hoping that it goes well.
I have been mapping for a few years, but only doing little custom or "fun" maps, this is my 2nd attempt at a serious map.

You can also follow that filefront link to my other maps that i have made, i can supply screenshots if required but there is some attatched to
the download links in filefront.

It has been tested on a few servers and the response was good

Cheers

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I'm judging by your screenshots, but to me it looks like it lacks continuity. Different texture schemes, different lighting schemes - it looks like it's several different maps, rather than one map.

I do like the fourth screenshot though (the infested corridor). I was actually planning something similar for my next mapping project (if I ever get around to doing it).

Yeah, it looks a bit random now that i look at it like that, although it some how works in-game...

with screenshot #4

I love this screenshot, its my favourite of all time, i dont know how i made that infestation look so good, but i love it...

In the fifth one, the "hive," the crossbars need infestation. They're just kind of jutting out of the infestation like the stuff doesn't like that kind of metal or something (lol). Add maybe an overlaid see-thru infestation texture right on the surface or something if you can't find or make an infested version of that texture.

The fourth one is schmexy.

The others...yeah. Is the first one during a game? Because I can't see any other reason for a random fade in rine spawn (lol again). All of them are a bit out of whack with each other; they don't really fit together like one would expect. Of course, unless you made screens every half a second as you walked thru the map then made a GIF, we wouldn't really know how it works "ingame" without DL'ing and trying it (which I'm thinking about doing anyways lol).

Just to clarify about the fade.

Its a holographic image on a table that i thought would look cool in marine spawn, as if they were studying the aliens or something like that.

Nice map, mirror also made:
http://halflife2.filefront.com/file/;75420

I would love to mirror your other maps, but I don't have any information nor screenshots for them.